Introduction:
We have a lot of teamwork, varying from simple ones to complex ones. In this paper, the topic is we are going to design a kitchenware within a team. Different groups lead to different product results. As we can see from the kitchenware design pictures, different leadership and different working environment delivers different styles. Those picture vividly illustrate the idea. Leaders decide the final design.
And in this blog, the whole idea of us is to analyze different exercises and by comparing different situations getting our own optimized solution. So, the first part is that we are going to talk about these 2 exercises based on 2 different teamwork environments. And some detailed principles would be presented later. And also we will mention the different elements, such as trust and leaderships in building a team, which actually play important roles in teamwork.
Exercise A1 (With a Supervisor)
3) No laughing is allowed. The company believes that laughing is not conducive to productivity.
Actually the whole process is instructed by a supervisor. We designed a Classic Saucepan during this process. Here is the pitch address.https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CkXHF2biPng
The disadvantages of this mode are obvious, people don’t trust their supervisor that much with the passage of time, they are afraid of being denied. Who would choose to stay in a stressful, divisive atmosphere if offered a productive, supportive one?(Robert F. Hurley, 2006). Also, team could not take advantage of brainstorming, they could not get enough good ideas to show their creativity, which, are even more significant than the good people(Ed Catmull,2008). Their behaviors and ideas are restricted. Those restrictions indicate in the product, which simply focuses on one single function and is less convenient for multiple uses. The overall environment of the team is quietness and the culture of their team is restriction. But it obviously against the Pixar’s Operation Principle (Ed Catmull, 2008), they are not free and they are afraid of being scolded. They were not allowed to laugh, the teamwork they did could not really pressurize them and they are afraid of announce their claims. Whenever there is some facts, the supervisor would be very easily to ignore the ladder of inference and jump to his own conclusion or even build a biased belief to inhibit him explore the real insights. Also, people tend to think their own ideas right, but if you conduct this whole idea to a teamwork, it might sometimes result in the whole work’s failure.
I read the article (Dean Tjosvold Alfred S.H. Wong, 2000)The leader relationship: building teamwork with and among employees. For my opinion, team leader is building the teamwork among the team while a supervisor is building the teamwork with the team member. Supervisors don’t get themselves involved in the real environment and easily to judge the work and people. I wish it could be improved by applying some practical theories or based on this failed case, they can reflect on it and for a better performance in the future.
When thinking back to the whole process of the past two exercises, we find out that a leader with magnanimous and farseeing character which will allow him or her to put the interests of the whole above everything is more important than their professional ability in promoting a high performance collaboration and the entire success of a project and further more the whole organization.
The second exercise A2 seemed to show us an ideal and nice organization atmosphere. But a voluntary team also needs some conditions to guarantee its formation, continuity and even the final success. First requirement is the degree of freedom of the organization. In our exercise, we just consider the ideal condition that the firm is willing to see that many departments are working together for one project voluntary. But when launching such thoughts in reality, there will be many challenges such as the employees also have works in their d epartment, the funding issues, and support from all the department managers. Without freedom organization culture, it will only be a beautiful dream. The spare time and extra energy is the second necessity to guarantee such collaboration. I think the prevalence and prosperity of the poetry in Tang Dynasty, China is a very good example for both of these. If you are familiar with the Chinese history, you can easily find that it is the enlightened policy (degree of freedom in the organization) and wealthy government (spare time and extra energy) that lead to and guarantee poetize during the spare time.
In this blog, we are going to talk about 2 exercises based on a
working team intend to innovate a new kitchenware product for market. But based
on the 2 different teamwork environment.
We have a lot of teamwork, varying from simple ones to complex ones. In this paper, the topic is we are going to design a kitchenware within a team. Different groups lead to different product results. As we can see from the kitchenware design pictures, different leadership and different working environment delivers different styles. Those picture vividly illustrate the idea. Leaders decide the final design.
Considering the advantages and disadvantages of teamwork, in this kitchenware design project, we basically design the kitchenware from 2 perspectives in the first place. In the first exercise, we have this teamwork under the supervision of a team supervisor, who actually controls the direction of the whole design and has absolute power in this team and the second perspective is much tenderer, it leads by common team members and everyone has certain right to say something. So in the end, actually the 2 exercises deliver different product designs.
And in this blog, the whole idea of us is to analyze different exercises and by comparing different situations getting our own optimized solution. So, the first part is that we are going to talk about these 2 exercises based on 2 different teamwork environments. And some detailed principles would be presented later. And also we will mention the different elements, such as trust and leaderships in building a team, which actually play important roles in teamwork.Exercise A1 (With a Supervisor)
1) Elect one group member to be the supervisor. Everyone must check in with the supervisor when they have an idea and the supervisor has to approve it. The supervisor will instruct the rest of the team on what is the next direction to proceed with the script writing process.
2) Any time the supervisor decides something is a good idea (such as he/she gives a compliment,) the supervisor also has to point out two negative aspects.3) No laughing is allowed. The company believes that laughing is not conducive to productivity.
4) No team member is allowed to talk without the permission to speak from the supervisor.
5) The supervisor presents the pitch.
Actually the whole process is instructed by a supervisor. We designed a Classic Saucepan during this process. Here is the pitch address.https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CkXHF2biPng
When you do the cooking, it would be like this
This reason for this product is because this whole kitchenware is under the control of one single person’s idea. Even though there are a lot of other team member’s voices, but there could only be one final voice for the product. Supervisor is the top person of the whole team and project. During the teamwork discussion, the supervisor tended to hear the voice he liked, and easily form the bias of trusting those with the similar idea of his own. The design of this product’s core idea is environment friendly, so we just focus on this main function of the saucepan, during the innovation session, when we discuss about the span design, the environment became very intense because as long as we provide with different ideas and wanted to explore more function of a kitchenware, the supervisor just denied the discussion and just jump to the conclusion of the design disobeys the environment friendly idea. So everyone just does not want to talk, because if they exploit their fresh idea, it would be denied immediately. Employee trusted the supervisor and told him what they thought about, however, under the dictatorship of the supervisor, their trusts turned out to be supervisor’s denials. All of this is because the supervisor obviously trust himself even more. With the procedure of the whole process, the trust among team member and supervisor became thin. The supervisor tends to be biased. So the final result of the product is a simple with single product concept-----“environmentally friendly” saucepan.
The disadvantages of this mode are obvious, people don’t trust their supervisor that much with the passage of time, they are afraid of being denied. Who would choose to stay in a stressful, divisive atmosphere if offered a productive, supportive one?(Robert F. Hurley, 2006). Also, team could not take advantage of brainstorming, they could not get enough good ideas to show their creativity, which, are even more significant than the good people(Ed Catmull,2008). Their behaviors and ideas are restricted. Those restrictions indicate in the product, which simply focuses on one single function and is less convenient for multiple uses. The overall environment of the team is quietness and the culture of their team is restriction. But it obviously against the Pixar’s Operation Principle (Ed Catmull, 2008), they are not free and they are afraid of being scolded. They were not allowed to laugh, the teamwork they did could not really pressurize them and they are afraid of announce their claims. Whenever there is some facts, the supervisor would be very easily to ignore the ladder of inference and jump to his own conclusion or even build a biased belief to inhibit him explore the real insights. Also, people tend to think their own ideas right, but if you conduct this whole idea to a teamwork, it might sometimes result in the whole work’s failure.
However, there are some advantages concerning the governance of a team. It made the whole team organized with regulation and did not conflict with each other at the same time because they just could not speak at the same time. And also, the team is very quick to act with a single order. And they might be very concentrated on the single goal. I think this could contribute to goal-fixed projects but contributes less to the creative projects.
I read the article (Dean Tjosvold Alfred S.H. Wong, 2000)The leader relationship: building teamwork with and among employees. For my opinion, team leader is building the teamwork among the team while a supervisor is building the teamwork with the team member. Supervisors don’t get themselves involved in the real environment and easily to judge the work and people. I wish it could be improved by applying some practical theories or based on this failed case, they can reflect on it and for a better performance in the future.
Exercise A2
In this exercise, because the environment and leadership assessment changes, the principles are as follow:
1) Everyone must have the freedom to communicate with everyone.
2) It must be safe for everyone to offer ideas.
3) The team collectively presents the pitch.
We gathered different staffs from different departments to enhance our new product’ s creativity. Actually we built a virtual team, as they didn’t have responsibility for our kitchenware development.
We are crazy! Finally we achieved a series of high-tech kitchenware that can fit nearly all-family members’ need. They were not just product improvement but the concept changing. They can tell you exactly what’s in your food including what chemical makeup of food and will also give you calorie and fat information.
This is just a beginning that can help people cook. We also dreamed a 3D food printer uses edible inks and electronic blueprints. What’s more, we considered the kitchen safe not just using a clock but a smart controller. We even cared about the cooking feeling. We connected the cooktop with social media and even bring people together! It’s amazing!
Supervisor cannot supervise running ideas! Although we can find some problems objectively in our proposal. For instance they cannot get business value in return quickly. And we only strive to make a great kitchenware but didn’t operate within time, budget, and people constraints, as we didn’t have a supervisor to limit us. But what the “How Pixar Fosters Collective Creativity” tells us that talent is rare. Management’s job is not to prevent risk but to build the capability to recover when failures occur. It must be safe for us to tell the truth then we run out so crazy ideas excitedly.
Creativity is not a lonely dance!Our discussion gathered product department, sales department, marketing department, technology department, or even HR department to share their brain trust. They know what is the kitchen trend in the future, the market share in current marketing and even what can lead the kitchen revolution. With the encouragement of unrestrained mind sharing, they created the future. People tend to think of creativity as a mysterious solo act. However, creativity involves a large number of people from different disciplines working effectively together to solve a great many problems.
What should be noticed next is that it’s really hard to get talented people to work effectively with one another. That takes trust and respect, which managers can’t mandate; they must be earned over time. What we can do is construct an environment that nurtures trusting and respectful relationships and unleashes everyone’s creativity.
When thinking back to the whole process of the past two exercises, we find out that a leader with magnanimous and farseeing character which will allow him or her to put the interests of the whole above everything is more important than their professional ability in promoting a high performance collaboration and the entire success of a project and further more the whole organization.
Analysis and Comparisons:
As we mentioned above, actually we have already did the 2 exercises we described and got different results even doing the same kitchenware design work. In exercise A1, the biggest problem was the supervisor could not actually communicate with other members efficiently so that a single person conducted the project and that person easily believed itself and biased others. During the teamwork exercise, we could not really talk about what we were thinking and felt really embarrassed about the processes and even doubted that we could make a functional kitchenware.
So when it came to the second exercise, when we adjusted our communication methods and sharing ideas in an equal and comfortable environment, we tended to think more freely and come up with more innovative ideas that would definitely not happen in the first situation. The whole process is smoothly and innovative, even though we did stray from the project’s point, we tolerated it as viable atmosphere committing to our project. And at the end of our exercise, we reflected of what happened during the whole process and thought out of box with the intention of integrating to support our group work and avoid similar problems in the future. Such as the launch of Group Decision Support System. The whole process was comfortable and team members trusted their team members that their ideas could be heard. They would commit themselves to the work more compared with the first situation and we were willing to working on another project together in the future.
So we come to the conclusion of different leaderships promoting different product styles and analyze human nature. The concerns of trust among team members and how to deliver an innovative project would also be covered in the later discussion.
First of all, there are always some leaders who taking every of their employees as threats and afraid to be replaced. In such condition, they consider more about how can they perform well in front of their leaders and prevent their employees from any opportunities that may make the big boss
find their value even though such an idea may be very valuable for the interests of the whole organization. They decline to promote talents despite those good guys will have a big contribution to the organization in the future. Such leaders always tend to be stable and safety in the daily works and avoid taking any risks, which greatly restricts the innovation of a team. Nobody will exert all their energies when under such a negative organization culture and as time passed, the team members will be risk aversion and accept such atmosphere. In the exercise A1, as the script and pitch will be shown to those senior executive, the team leader may eager to show his or her opinions to the big boss and hope to be agreed and even appreciated, which will consequent prevent him or her from listening to the others’ advice. This has beyond the simple trust and rational decision making field; there are about the human nature.
Such human nature may always come from the flattery from the subordinate. There are always such people who try their best to please leadership favor no matter whether the leader is right or wrong wherever organizations or countries. These kinds of flatteries can lead to the arrogance to varying extent and this is why those leaders in power for a long time may lose themselves in some circumstance. Leader like this are more easily to take many things for granted; and the enjoyment of the leadership will also make them afraid to lose such power. In the end, it will form such character we discussed above, which does harms to the teams and entire organization greatly.
The second exercise A2 seemed to show us an ideal and nice organization atmosphere. But a voluntary team also needs some conditions to guarantee its formation, continuity and even the final success. First requirement is the degree of freedom of the organization. In our exercise, we just consider the ideal condition that the firm is willing to see that many departments are working together for one project voluntary. But when launching such thoughts in reality, there will be many challenges such as the employees also have works in their d epartment, the funding issues, and support from all the department managers. Without freedom organization culture, it will only be a beautiful dream. The spare time and extra energy is the second necessity to guarantee such collaboration. I think the prevalence and prosperity of the poetry in Tang Dynasty, China is a very good example for both of these. If you are familiar with the Chinese history, you can easily find that it is the enlightened policy (degree of freedom in the organization) and wealthy government (spare time and extra energy) that lead to and guarantee poetize during the spare time.
Let us think about a leader with magnanimous and farseeing character. When involving in a negotiation, they will show another kind of way of bounding. Instead of just focus on the immediate interests, they can bound across time and space. Such farseeing character allows them to give up some interests for now but establish the relationship of cooperation in the long term. Today’s concession may bring us bigger interests in the future. This kind of human nature may cater the basic of trust more suitable. Bypass their personal interests and pay more attention to the motivation of employees’ enthusiasm and innovation towards the project and also form a culture of knowledge management which encourage even award those knowledge discovery, knowledge sharing, knowledge exchange and knowledge application. Make a big pie rather than the life-and-death struggle. After all, only when they find someone properly for their current occupation can they leave it and get the further promotion; otherwise, the senior managers may also feel intractability when they want to promote you.
After overall consideration, we draw a conclusion that such a leader with magnanimous and farseeing character can play a role which is very essential for the success of high performance collaboration. They just play as link and hub in the team. Instead of be a leader, they are more of a coordinator without any authority that may pressure on others no matter tangible or intangible. Solve the conflict, do proper promotion, right the wrong direction and monitor the whole process of the project so as to guarantee the success in the condition that also meet the standard of budget and schedule. Comparing with exercise A1 and A2, the result of this may be more beneficial. And only if a leader with magnanimous and farseeing character can afford to play that role. The wealth and benefits they bring to the collaboration will be inestimable.
Reference:
Reference:
1.Tjosvold, D., & Wong, A. S. (2000). The leader relationship: building teamwork with and among employees. Leadership & Organization Development Journal, 21(7), 350-354.
2.Catmull, E. (2008). How Pixar fosters collective creativity. Harvard Business School Publishing.
3. Hurley, R. F. (2006). The decision to trust. Harvard Business Review, 84(9), 55-62.
4. Y., Tong. (2013). Spontaneous virtual team: Improving organizational performance through information and communication technology. Business Horizons, 56, 361-375.
Below is old version
Exercise A1 (With a Supervisor)
Principles:
1) Elect one group member to be the supervisor. Everyone must
check in with the supervisor when they have an idea and the supervisor has to
approve it. The supervisor will instruct the rest of the team on what is the
next direction to proceed with the script writing process.
2) Any time the supervisor decides something is a good idea (such as he/she gives a compliment,) the supervisor also has to point out two negative aspects.
3) No laughing is allowed. The company believes that laughing is not conducive to productivity.
4) No team member is allowed to talk without the permission to
speak from the supervisor.
K itchenwares make a different. The leader decides the final design.
5) The supervisor presents the pitch.
Innovating a kitchenware in a team.
In this Exercise A1, actually the whole process is instructed by a supervisor.
We designed a Classic Saucepan during this process.
Here is the pitch address.
We can get the picture and development ideas from this
Delicious?
This reason for this product is because this whole kitchenware
is under the control of one single person’s idea.
Even though there are a lot of other team member’s voices, but there could only
be one final voice for the product. Supervisor is the top
person of the whole team and project. During the teamwork discussion, the supervisor
tended to hear the voice he liked, and easily form the bias of trusting those
with the similar idea of his own. The design of this product’s
core idea is environment
friendly, so we just focus on this main function of the saucepan, during
the innovation session, when we discuss about the span design, the environment
became very intense because as long as we provide with different ideas and
wanted to explore more function of a kitchenware, the supervisor just denied the discussion and just jump to the
conclusion of the design disobeys the environment friendly idea. So
everyone just does not want to talk, because if they exploit their fresh idea,
it would be denied immediately. The
trust among the team and supervisor has become very thin. The supervisor
tends to be biased. So the final result of the
product is a simple but environmentally friendly saucepan.
The disadvantages of this mode are obvious,
people don’t
trust each other, they are afraid of being denied. Who
would choose to stay in a stressful, divisive atmosphere if offered a
productive, supportive one?(Robert F. Hurley, 2006). Also, team could not take advantage
of brainstorming, they could not get enough good ideas to show their creativity, which,
are even more significant than the good people(Ed Catmull,2008). Their
behaviors and ideas are restricted. Those restrictions indicate in the product, which simply
focuses on one single function and is
less convenient for multiple uses. The overall environment of the team is
quietness and the culture of their
team is restriction. But it obviously against the Pixar’s Operation Principle (Ed Catmull, 2008), they are not free
and they are afraid of being scolded. They were not allowed to laugh, the teamwork they did could not really
pressurize them and they are afraid of announce their claims. Whenever there is some facts, the
supervisor would be very easily to ignore the ladder of inference and jump to
his own conclusion or even build a biased belief to inhibit him explore the
real insights. Also, people tend to think their own ideas right,
but if you conduct this whole idea to a teamwork, it might sometimes result in
the whole work’s failure.
However, there are some advantages concerning the governance of a team.
It made the whole team organized with
regulation and did not
conflict with each other at the same time because they just could not speak at
the same time. And they might be very concentrated on a single goal. I think this could contribute to goal-fixed projects but contributes less to the creative
projects.
I read the article (Dean Tjosvold Alfred S.H. Wong, 2000)The leader relationship: building teamwork
with and among employees. For my opinion, team leader is building the teamwork among the team while a
supervisor is building the
teamwork with the team member. Supervisors don’t get themselves involved in the
real environment and easily to judge the work and people. I wish it could be improved by applying some practical theories or based
on this failed case, they can reflect on
it and for a better performance in the future.
Exercise A2
In this exercise, the
principles changed to:
1) Everyone must have the freedom to communicate
with everyone.
2) It must be safe for everyone to offer ideas.
3) The team collectively presents the pitch.
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We are crazy!
Finally we achieved a series of high-tech kitchenware that
can fit nearly all-family members’ need. They were not just product improvement
but the concept changing. They can tell you exactly what’s in your food
including what chemical makeup of food and will also give you calorie and fat
information.
This is just a beginning that can help people cook. We also
dreamed a 3D food printer uses edible inks and electronic blueprints. What’s
more, we considered the kitchen safe not just using a clock but a smart
controller. We even cared about the cooking feeling. We connected the cooktop
with social media and even bring people together! It’s amazing!
Supervisor cannot supervise running ideas!
Although we can find some problems objectively in our
proposal. For instance they cannot get business value in return quickly. And we
only strive to make a great kitchenware but didn’t operate within time, budget,
and people constraints, as we didn’t have a supervisor to limit us. But what
the “How Pixar Fosters Collective Creativity” tells us that talent is rare. Management’s
job is not to prevent risk but to build the capability to recover when failures
occur. It must be safe for us to tell the truth then we run out so
crazy ideas excitedly.
Creativity is not a lonely dance!
Our discussion gathered product department, sales
department, marketing department, technology department, or even HR department to
share their brain trust. They know what is the kitchen trend in the future, the
market share in current marketing and even what can lead the kitchen
revolution. With the encourage of unrestrained
mind sharing, they created the future. People tend to think of creativity as a
mysterious solo act. However, creativity involves a large number of people from
different disciplines working effectively together to solve a great many
problems.
What should be noticed next is that it’s really hard to get
talented people to work effectively with one another. That takes trust and
respect, which managers can’t mandate; they must be earned over time. What we can do is construct an environment that nurtures
trusting and respectful relationships and unleashes everyone’s creativity.
When thinking back to the whole process of the past two
exercises, we find out that a leader
with magnanimous and farseeing character which will allow him or her to put the
interests of the whole above everything is more important than their
professional ability in promoting a high performance collaboration and the
entire success of a project and further more the whole organization.
Analysis & Suggestions
There always be some leaders who taking every of their employees as
threats and afraid to be replaced. In such condition, they consider more
about how can they perform well in front of their leaders and prevent their
employees from any opportunities that may make the big boss find their value even though such an idea may
be very valuable for the interests of the whole organization. They decline to promote
talents despite those good guys will have a big contribution to the
organization in the future. Such leaders always tend to be stable and safety in
the daily works and avoid taking any risks, which greatly restricts the
innovation of a team. Nobody will exert all their energies when under such a
negative organization culture and as time passed, the team members will be risk
aversion and accept such atmosphere. In the exercise A1?, as the script and pitch will be shown
to those senior executive, the team leader may eager to show his or her
opinions to the big boss and hope to be agreed and even appreciated, which will
consequent prevent him or her from listening to the others’ advice. This has
beyond the simple trust and rational decision making field; there are about
the human nature.
![]() |
![]() |
The
second exercise A2
seemed to show us an ideal and nice organization atmosphere. But a voluntary team
also needs some conditions to guarantee its formation, continuity and even the final success. First requirement is the degree of freedom of the
organization. In our exercise, we just consider the ideal condition that
the firm is willing to see that many departments are working together for one
project voluntary. But when launching such thoughts in reality, there will be
many challenges such as the employees also have works in their d epartment, the funding issues, and support from all
the department managers. Without freedom organization culture, it will only be
a beautiful dream. The spare time and extra energy is the second necessity
to guarantee such collaboration. I think the prevalence and prosperity of the poetry
in Tang Dynasty, China is a very good example for both of these. If you are familiar
with the Chinese history, you can easily find that it is the enlightened policy
(degree of freedom in the organization) and wealthy government (spare time and
extra energy) that lead to and guarantee poetize during the spare time.
Let us think about a leader
with magnanimous and farseeing character.
When involving in a negotiation, they will show another kind of way of
bounding. Instead of just focus on the immediate interests, they can bound
across time and space. Such farseeing character allows them to give up some
interests for now but establish the relationship of cooperation in the long
term. Today’s
concession may bring us bigger interests in the future. This kind of
human nature may cater the basic of trust more suitable. Bypass their personal
interests and pay more attention to the motivation of employees’ enthusiasm and
innovation towards the project and also form a culture of knowledge management
which encourage even award those knowledge discovery, knowledge sharing,
knowledge exchange and knowledge application. Make a big pie rather than the
life-and-death struggle. After all, only when they find someone properly for their current
occupation can they leave it and get the further promotion; otherwise,
the senior managers may also feel intractability when they want to promote you.
After overall consideration, we draw a conclusion that such
a leader with magnanimous and farseeing character can play a role which is very
essential for the success of high performance collaboration. They just play as link and
hub in the team. Instead of be a leader, they are more of a coordinator
without any authority that may pressure on others no matter tangible or
intangible. Solve
the conflict, do proper promotion, right the wrong direction and monitor the
whole process of the project so as to
guarantee the success in the condition that also meet the standard of budget
and schedule. Comparing with exercise A1 and A2, the result of this may be more
beneficial. And only if a leader with magnanimous and farseeing character can
afford to play that role. The wealth and benefits they bring to the
collaboration will be inestimable.
Reference:
1.Tjosvold, D., &
Wong, A. S. (2000). The leader relationship: building teamwork with and among
employees. Leadership & Organization Development Journal, 21(7), 350-354.
2.Catmull, E. (2008).
How Pixar fosters collective creativity. Harvard Business School Publishing.
3. Hurley, R. F.
(2006). The decision to trust. Harvard Business Review, 84(9), 55-62.
4. Y., Tong. (2013). Spontaneous virtual team:
Improving organizational performance through information and communication
technology. Business Horizons, 56, 361-375.























The content of the blog is good, and it tells me a lot about negotiation and teamwork! However, I find the pictures used in the blog is obscure , maybe you'd better choose more distinct pictures with high pixel. And the pictures should fit the blog's size.
ReplyDeleteOh, you three members' head portraits are all children, I guess those are your images when you were very very young!
Babies! HAHA!!!!!
hahaha, you are so cute! yes, they were our children-time pictures, thanks for your suggestion, we will find higher-qualitied pictures and better our blog.
DeleteDear Group 9 Tick Tack
ReplyDeleteIt’s teacher Frank here. I have a fun time reading this. I especially appreciate your weaving leadership (individual level) into the process analysis of your team’s innovation in two decision contexts in ways that satires many cultures’ projected “romance of leadership”—where we like to credit leaders for their seemingly impossible inhumanly heroic deeds, when it is often the extreme context that overrides outcomes.
Nice use of visuals and graphics. I like the coherence you imposed upon the complexity of interrelated social phenomena and explain the hows and whys behind group process innovation. You have clear subsections that progress narratives in a journalistic style; disparate application of a set of concepts from readings and other disciplines to explain, elucidate, analyze; an “ironic tone” colored by wry humor in your narrative voice in the analysis part (very difficult to arrive at this level of awareness for consistency). You are a born writer at heart; talk to me some more after class.
I am giving meticulous detailed about all the red flag the readers might have in reading your post in the hope that you will hone your reflexive practices and become a better critical thinker. You have shown many signs of promise in becoming and developing into very good critical, reflexive thinkers as well as feature journalists with an eye for the ironic and subtle of social lives. Your group is full generative capacity and creative potential in making refreshing connections among well-chosen topics for their creative tension and applying concepts in surprising contexts while bridging gaps between contexts. The choices of connection are fine, but they can be streamlined a little to allow a smoother flow, and maybe try to smooth out the transitions where your writing goals change from description to analysis to satire, etc.
However, less is sometimes more. You might want to be strategic after you have creatively explored your connections and unique tone in narrative voice. Revision is the time to channel all those provocative creative thinking and thought of your group to focused aims of making greatest impact in the conclusion through developing and building arguments based on good information and data with persuasive rhetorical power of rigor and relevance. Revision often involves trimming excess fat, and extraneous appendixes to heighten coherence in making the points of the message impactful and transformative.
ReplyDeleteI recommend you work on having a nice introduction that situates your readers the conceptual issues at hand you are addressing. The mere scenario descriptions do not make a good introduction, probably the single most important section of one’s writer where a thesis statement about what it promises the readers to learn and experience about the surrounding unsolved debates or puzzling enigmas in the creative tensions of the suggested topics. Through selective, appropriate analyses, relevant integration of concepts from lectures, readings, or other literature in developing and extending arguments, one then arrives the concluding insight or culminating lesson, as promised and hinted by your thesis statement in the introduction, as if it’s a well choreograph dance with all dance moves intentionally strategic in achieving the desired mood and aesthetic accents in their particular sequence in time and space. Knowing and understanding your concluding point enables you to take the most effective approaches to communicate with your readers through appropriate analysis that confers rigor best applies your data and information as generated in group innovation processes and lends clarity in choosing relevant literature that explains, informs, and elucidates.
This is a pretty nice first draft, though there is still room for improvement. Please adopt suggestions as you see fit. Please post a separate new post of this assignment, and keep the old post intact with comments from me and others. This way it shows your revision effort and gets you bonus points. Enjoy writing and learning!
Also, this is not meant to be a blog comment as a peer; rather, it's written as recommendations for improvement. So, please do not emulate my style in making blog comments on each other's blogs. Please see Trello cards on tips on making constructive comments. Thanks.
Best, Frank
AESTHETIC AND ORIGINALITY
ReplyDeleteNice pictures and video show your products. The pictures in the content can also show your key points. You can add videos through bloggers instead of offering the links.
You have chosen to label your subsections in ways that move the story forward in a journalistic style, rather in ways that indicate the content to follow. It is a fine style, but you lose your consistency at times, and then lose your style. Better to be consistent through out to arrive at heightened coherence through parallel structures.
There is too much focus on the products themselves, which cannot enhance arguments for you unless you link their comparative features, comparative qualities along dimensions such as creativity, marketability, feasibility, and radicalness between two innovative products or the two innovation processes , or the two innovation contexts to the very process analysis of group innovation itself.
Reflection is learning to learn from experience. Reflection is a skill involving observation, asking questions, and putting facts, ideas, and experiences together to add new meaning to them all. Regularity, and quality of a reflective component (Conrad & Hedin, 1982) that continually develops an individual’s higher level thinking and problem solving through reflective moments and practices. Being able to analyze problems, generate alternatives, and anticipate consequences are critical skills in any area of life.
Reflection on group processes is the process by which participants mentally and emotionally synthesize direct group processes with their attendant individual experiences, group processes and outcomes through integration and accommodation. How is the process of reflecting on the group processes especially challenging and interesting in informing learning from experience, and here the experience of group innovation processes? In engage in critical reflection of group processes, one can identify what helped and what hindered the quality of learning and whether certain behaviors had a positive or negative effect. Team members can reflect on both the processes and products of group work.
INSIGHT AND PROVOCATION:
ReplyDeleteIn your blog, description and analysis are separated. Such structure is not bad, but the trouble is when you do analysis, you need to return to the description to find details to support your argument and readers can hardly remember the content you have put before. Also, the transition is not smooth at moment. A good introduction is desperately needed, and it would help you in stylistically smooth out the different styles in different parts of the writing by orienting the readers well that they are willing to overlook jarring fashion gauche and might even call it avant garde.
Leadership is a very important factor that influences teamwork process; much of the literature of management that starts the discipline or field is about leadership, and the field still didn’t figure it out. Leadership is something that does not totally originate from personality. Leadership, or any other personal behavioral tendency or ability is the result from the interaction of environment (context), personality (inborn personal trait), and interacting with followers (in relational practices). It is hard to draw the conclusion that leader in scenario 1 was born with low trust: a few more argument extension would need to be built on top of one another to get there through citing and bridging concepts, theories, and findings with your inferences. There is no evidence from the scenario that it is the subordinates that help leader to gain such insecurity.
Here, the key point is to do a process analysis justice is to examine the important and surprising ways that leadership assumes in impacting a group’s innovation process. Discussing and analyzing the general factors that influence a leader’s behaviors in contexts and generalize your arguments to a leader’s role in a group’s innovation process so would be imprecise, decontextualized, anachronistic, and lacking in rigor and persuasion.
When you do analysis on leadership in collaboration, you can ask following questions. How and why do leaders can influence trust, communication or teamwork? How do leaders influence trust, communication or teamwork? How can environment facilitate leaders or prohibit such leaders to influence teamwork? How can subordinates facilitate leaders’ leadership or prohibit such leaders to influence teamwork? Furthermore, since every coin own double sides. Dictatorships negatively influence collaboration. On the other side, it may play a role in speeding collaboration by making quick decision by one person. Based on the context, culture and employees, you can do more analysis on leadership.
Cooperative atmosphere is another factor that can impact in collaboration. If you analysis this factor in teamwork. I think you should not only pay attention to open cooperation atmosphere as manifested in the organizational practice called “open innovation” that makes its innovation process as boundaryless as possible by enlarging the organization’s stakeholders, internal and external. What you need to think is how such atmosphere can influence teamwork. Freedom in organization can motivate creativity or innovation since everyone has a chance to press their opinions. But freedom in organization can also slow down the collaboration practice since it takes time to listen to everyone’s idea and without leaders; it is hard to get the final decision. In a word, when you reflect the teamwork process and do analysis on the impactful factors, you need to make the argument on how the factors influence teamwork, especially, emergent group innovation in process.
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ReplyDeleteWhen you do analysis, after making arguments, you need to use concepts and details in the scenario to support your points. As I mentioned, you separate the description and analysis. This disadvantage is obvious. First, readers can hardly remember the details in both scenarios. Second, when you refer too much to the description part, the blog seems long-winded. Here, I think you had better just give readers a brief introduction of both scenarios in the first. In the analysis part, you illustrate the story in detail. Then readers can get the whole picture of the story with your analysis in depth. Yes, it’s all about how form follows and relates to content; they can enhance or detract each other. If you have bad style, it’s going to make it hard to make the gold shine in mud.
Reflection on group processes is the process by which participants mentally and emotionally synthesize direct group processes with their attendant individual experiences, group processes and outcomes. Reflection is important for both individuals and in groups, as reflection helps internalize the lessons learned and connects those lessons to personal choices and a basic discussion that addresses the progressively sophisticated inquiry that addresses what? so what? now what? The reflective inquiry continually builds insights on prior insights.
MASTERY AND UNDERSTANDING:
You can further analyze and generate data and information through better reflection of group processes and individual experiences in the group by examining the feelings and perceptions surrounded the group and individual experience? How do feelings and perceptions relate to each other? What do you do when they are in contradiction? How do the different decision contexts create anticipation and expectation of your roles that affect the feelings and perceptions surrounded the group and individual experience? What might this experience mean in the context of your course?
These are precious primary data that are based on individual and group perception, experience, and emotional responses, which profitably prove or substantiate your positions more persuasively then explanation informed by a set of disparate and loosely held theories (Leader-Member Exchange Theory, LMX), concepts, or even inquiry methods (appreciative inquiry model of examining the social phenomena at hands through four separate stages of discovery, dream, design, and destiny).
In your blog, two main arguments are leadership and organizational atmosphere. When you make arguments and choose support materials, there is one step in the middle that is, using theories to prove that your argument is right. For the leadership argument, you have mentioned that because of dictator leadership, low trust and irrational decision making in team work. First, you have to prove that leadership impact teamwork and dictator leadership impact teamwork negatively. Thus, such leader can lead to low trust and irrational decision making in teams. Second, you mention that leadership is hard to change since it is born with. You have to use “trait theory” in leadership that such bad leader is shaped by his or her personality and external environment. By doing this, this argument can be regarded as proved. In your analysis, large part is attributed to descriptions about the behavior of the leader without telling its influence on teamwork process.
For the argument about atmosphere in organization is also the same order. Just prove that open atmosphere can motivate innovation and trust in teamwork process.
CLARITY AND COHERENCE:
ReplyDeleteThrough integration and accommodation between the individual experience and the emergent group process of which the individual participates, group level reflection is often accomplished through an active negotiation and resolution of meaning through a dialogic relationship of continuous, mindful reconciliation of sort between the individual experience and the group experience of which one creates jointly together with other teammates via the emergent process of becoming. This a pretty complex writing process if only one knows the sheer difficulty of practicing group level reflection with mindful heedfulness, let alone describing, writing, and analyzing it. So, style becomes very important. As it is so easy to become unclear and incoherent during complexity when a writer needs to weaves and integrate all these pieces into analysis and still make them pretty. It’s going to be an overstuff dress no matter what, so why not make the dress black to slim it a little?
The structure of your writing is clear, and your audience gets your message and points. Yet, you have ignored one key analytical tool that is immensely persuasive in doing process analysis in two distinct decision contexts: comparing and contrasting of antecedents, consequences, and all those go between group innovation processes. In your blog, two scenarios seem irrelevant. To the opposite, these two scenarios can be seemed as two extreme environments that teamwork must operate.
Through comparing and contrasting, you can see that there are disadvantages and advantages in both contexts. Leadership in both scenarios can be discussed more in depth, and treating it like a pre-factual (as opposed to counterfactual) simulation forward for additional reflection for rich interpretation and inference. In scenario 1, leader can make quick decision to shorten the time in teamwork, even if there is low trust in the team. Yet, in scenario 2, there will be a innovative product plan, but it takes time since there is no clear leader. For the atmosphere part, it is quite difference in these two contexts. Such atmosphere also brings advantage and disadvantage to teamwork. Without making comparison, you can hardly reflect how collaborative atmosphere influences or is influenced the team collaboration process coherently or effectively.
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ReplyDeleteThe video is very attractive to me. And as well as the group picture. For one thing I'd like to suggest is that background picture is too dark, and impact some of the typing to be seen clearly. May be next time you can choose some light pictures.
ReplyDeleteThanks professor! we have made certain changes about the evidence and conclusion, and also the transition smoothness of our blog and updated it to a new address. Thanks so much for your advice!
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ReplyDeleteFirst of all, I think it’s better to create a new post for your revised assignment, so that readers can know which part is the final version and it’s easier for them to compare the 2 versions.
It’s very nice that you’ve updated your post based on Frank’s suggestions, like the introduction. Although all classmates know the scenarios and the assignment, the new introduction can make others readers (which are not our classmates) to understand what your post is.
I like your quotation of addition articles about leadership to explain the scenario 1, but it would be better to have a synopsis of the article, so that reader can have the concept of it, instead of just state your opinion.
For the conclusion, as Frank mentioned, “Leadership is a very important factor that influences teamwork process” and you should figure out the field. However, I found that it’s not clear enough, I would suggest you to elaborate more.
Last, the pictures you used make the blog more interesting and I found some have been modified, thanks for putting lots efforts on it in order to make the blog attractive to us!
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ReplyDeleteAwesome and rich content article.Many cute graphs to help understand different concepts.In management some concepts are really boring and hard to understand. And you have changed your content as instruction in short time, good guys.Although blogger is hard to use, i suggest u had better to fix the size of pic and the format of the article, which can help to read.Meanwhile the part of description and analysis are concrete. If there are some real cases about collaboration in business, it will be an excellent article.
Thank you for bringing me such good article